Articles
Creating Awesome Ads
By Jim Foreman
As a popular Web Classifieds Publisher I see
over two thousand ad submissions daily. The
two most repeated mistakes writers make to
compromise their ad's effectiveness are:
1) failure to qualify the audience and/or
I believe we can morph the solution to both
mistakes into this one article.
To design an "AWESOME" ad follow these four
essential AIDA basics.
(A)ttention - (I)nterest - (D)esire - (A)ction
If your ad doesn't contain "ALL" of these,
it is not an "AWESOME" Ad!
(A) TTENTION: & AD TITLE ABC's
(a) Know Your Audience.
You must first capture your readers' attention.
Picture the reader flipping through sections of
classifieds containing hundreds of ads, of which
your ad is just "another ride" in the park.
The ad that attracts the reader's gaze has a
title that may look "EXCITING" or even simply
"COMFORTABLE" but, most certainly, the ad
"SPEAKS" to them personally.
A sky divers club visiting Disney Land will
likely seek rides for their "thrill" value,
while a group of senior citizens may prefer the
"comfort" of a safari monorail through the
animal park.
Title "APPEAL" is different to different people
for different reasons at different times in their
different lives.
Before deciding where to advertise first decide
who's your "target" audience. Ignoring category
demographics is like trying to "sell air
conditioners to Eskimos." It just doesn't
generate enough heat to warm up the prospect to
your product or service.
(b) Position Your Ad for Success.
Don't expect readers to come to your ad,
take your ad to the people. If Mohammed
can't go to the mountain, bring the mountain
to Mohammed. Take the necessary time to place
your ad in the most appropriate section(s)
of the classifieds.
Now, that your ad is in the ball park,
through proper placement,there must be
"something" in the TITLE of your ad to STOP
reader scanning long enough for them to focus
on YOUR ad.
(c) Animate Your Ad
Animated banners out perform by 5:1 non-animated
banners. Why? Because, it's inbred through
genetics to FOCUS on MOVEMENT for PRIMAL reasons.
Movement in the primeval forest usually meant
either food or danger, and caused us
(man the hunter) like other animals, to freeze
and gaze intently.
Today's humans are very much like our ancestors.
We utilize our inherent tendencies when moving
through a forest of ads. Action words command
our attention. This knowledge helps advertisers
animate even non-graphic ads for greater
"eye catching" appeal.
Consider these two ad titles:
1) "URL Broadcasting can Skyrocket Your Profit" or
2) "Use Submission Software for Improved Sales".
Both titles contain 6 words, 42 characters, and
advertise submission software. But, do both
command equal attention? Notice that one ad
contains verbs and the other doesn't.
Verbs show ACTION!
Spend a goodly portion of your time,
as I have here, on your ad TITLE or
the reading process may END rather
than START here. To generate attention,
consider the flash value of the words in
your ad's title.
An awesome ad must cause the reader to
STOP and to INVESTIGATE your product.
(I) NTEREST:
The body of your ad must have cognitive
appeal. It must make enough good sense,
to be worthy of a visit to your site,
an email info request, or just to
continue reading the ad. Use the body's
description of your ad to state the
benefits or features your product holds
"in store" for the reader.
Develop a mental picture of the customers
who frequent the particular classified
section where you place your ad. What are
their demographics. What kinds of jobs do
they have, cars do they drive, are they
young, old, single, married? The clearer
and more real your mental picture of your
audience, the better you can match the
features and benefits of your product to
their interests.
There are general and specific reader
interests. We all want to make a "smart"
buy of a "dependable" product that is
"productive" for our purposes. But, the web
business man or woman will be especially
interested in buying a "proven" product that
"maximizes" their "exposure" to "new"
clients and helps to "close" the sale.
Always look for the "unique" features of
your product that is not being offered by your
competitors. This is your market "niche".
After making logical sense to the reader,
you will then need to turn interest into a
"personal desire" for your product.
(D) ESIRE:
Interest alone is not enough! The awesome ad
"stimulates" the reader toward desire. While
interest can generally be obtained by
highlighting the practical properties of your
product, your words will need to stroke more
basic buyer erogenous zones in order to produce
DESIRE.
Is there something here that makes the reader
feel good, excited, confident, secure, hopeful
or powerful? Think about other emotions that
your product or service might evoke. Does your
product appeal to a particular sense. Can the
reader taste, hear, smell, see, or feel your
product. You need to CONVEY the EMOTIONAL APPEAL
of your product TO THE READER!
All, and let me emphasize, ALL ! "human actions
result from our desire to either experience
pleasure or to avoid pain". Desire (for your
offering) is created when your reader experiences
either; an anticipation of "pleasure" or
expectation of avoiding "pain" or problems
from the use or purchase of your product.
The influence that this "physiological" and
"psychological" fact has on prospect purchases
can not be overly stated.
Contrary to popular belief, we don't really
desire money. We may desire the "pleasure"
we believe money can bring. We may desire to not
experience the "pain" that might result from not
having money. The word "money" only "triggers"
the feelings and desires (within us) which we
seek...whether they be happy, secure, or
powerful desires, based upon our personal value
system and past experience.
It is the feelings that are attached to the
words of our ads that give them power.
Surviving is the "soul goal" of every living
cell in "every living thing" that exists
everywhere in the world. Primal concerns are
satisfied FIRST. The more PRIMAL the feelings
attached to the words in your ad, the GREATER
their POWER!
Everyone has experienced the power of "impulse
buying". Have you been grocery shopping while
hungry? Well, if you have, then you were"prime"
for food purchases. Did you make a new product
buy because the food looked "tasty"?
Did you purchase something on "crave value"
rather than "food value", or maybe spend more
money than you intended?
Well guess what? It is more than a little
likely that; your product will be purchased
on impulse. If your reader is not presently
in primal state you've got to get them there.
It is the job of your advertising to both
create and satisfy the reader's hunger.
There are always good, better and best words.
The right word(s) for creating product desire
are the ones that elicit biological emotional
responses in the reader. Emotional responses
bypass the cognitive process and cause us to
experience rather than merely read words.
(A) CTION:
If your reader does not take ACTION, there
is no sale. How do you get your reader to act?
Believe it or not it's easy, just use a "directive."
In your ad simply say: "call this number now",
"email me for details", "go to our website" etc.
Why would you create feelings in a prospect
without telling them what to do with those
feelings? Yet ironically, not asking for
the sale is the single most repeated mistake
that stops reader desire from leading to reader
action.
Psychologists tell us that when given a directive
(unless obviously harmful) our first instinct is
to comply. If you are at work, you can turn to the
person in the seat next to you, and in a slightly
commanding voice say, "give me your pen for a
minute"... chances are they will, and usually,
without question, for no other reason than
"you told them to do so."
If the first three ingredients
(attention, interest, and desire)
have been well done, and the reader
is a qualified customer.... they will more
than likely take the "action" you direct
them to take.
Develop your web ad with the above thoughts
in mind. Check your ad to see that the four
AIDA basics have been met. Now you have an
"AWESOME" web classified ad that will out pull,
by many times, the thoughtless ads of your
competition. That's the bottom line!
Author: Jim Foreman,
President of NetSeek World Presence
2) not following proven ad writing basics.
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